tale to tale

So for this challenge we were instructed to reduce the content of a play by half. Now when it comes to the spoken word challenge ‘Less Than Strangers’ it may have lost it’s flow in certain areas.

But I found it easy to cut, and so I made it more about getting to the point straight away and slimming down the imagary.

Which, is a shame. I think I prefer the original. The whole point of this spoken word piece was that people on the tube often lose themselves and wander off in thought. Much like the short does.

But he’s the main points of ‘Less Than Strangers’ in half the words:

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